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August 3, 2017 · Source: Medium

Everyday is like Today.

CHAPTER-1

Voice6
Lyric intensity4
The line7
Mind under feeling5
Held shape4
Literary mean 5.2 / 10

Highlights

...talking to myself in my mind with a serious face...
The line

Voice

The list format and unfiltered interiority create a frantic, recognizable persona.

Lyric intensity

Specific sensory details like “mixture of shampoo and dust” ground the chaos.

Mind under feeling

The transition from current domesticity to the past engagement provides some reflection.

Held shape

The narrative follows a chronological loop but stops abruptly at a cubicle.

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