Voice

Casual, confrontational, and self-referential; captures a specific, frantic urgency of persona.

Lyric intensity

Weakened by abstractions; 'stardust with Wi-Fi' feels dated, lacks sensory weight.

Mind under feeling

Heavy on defiance but light on introspection; avoids the 'how' of transformation.

Held shape

Strong cyclical structure; opening and closing on 'The line is a lie'.