Voice

Declarative, rhythmic, but leans heavily on familiar social media aphorisms.

Lyric intensity

Vivid: 'boys sleep shirtless' vs 'girls sweat indoors' captures the physical constraint.

Mind under feeling

Strong pivot: monsters as guardians, though the transition feels somewhat moralistic.

Held shape

Ends with a resonant 'rhyme' by reclaiming the opening cage metaphor.