Voice

Earnest and relatable, though echoing common internet-essay cadences and formatting.

Lyric intensity

Sensory weight in 'mango afternoons' and 'buying pens and ribbons for projects.'

Mind under feeling

Moves from personal memory to societal negotiation, but stays in the grief.

Held shape

Good circularity with fifteen-year markers; ending 'Sigh!' unfortunately deflates the tension.