Voice

Earnest and rhythmic; some generic travelogue phrasing slightly dilutes the specific personality.

Lyric intensity

Strong imagery: 'slippers stitched with multicolored threads' and 'silver streams' of banta.

Mind under feeling

Excellent swerve from geographic travel to the 'bairagi' in a Delhi office.

Held shape

Beautifully resolved; the airport 'warehouse-shaped doorway' finds its exit in the mountains.