Voice

Playful and conversational, though 'childhood performance culture' feels slightly modern/borrowed.

Lyric intensity

Excellent specificity in the 'Bollywood heroine' and the 'bright red beak' camouflage.

Mind under feeling

The 'Amoeba' realization is a good swerve, but mourning feels unexamined.

Held shape

Strong structural loop from the 'Green' opening to the 'last day' closure.