Voice

The snarky, conversational millennial exasperation feels intensely authentic and consistent throughout.

Lyric intensity

Humor replaces poetry; 'emotionally unstable brinjal' is vivid but the imagery remains flat.

Mind under feeling

The 'envy as annoyance' angle flips the script on traditional horror tropes.

Held shape

Moves well from critique to the 'dream life' realization, ending on challenge.