Voice

High-energy blog voice; relies on internet-standard hyperbole and relatable-content tropes.

Lyric intensity

Heavy on adjectives over imagery; 'wet puddle of mistakes' is playful but vague.

Mind under feeling

Standard 'feature not a bug' argument; could use more personal, idiosyncratic friction.

Held shape

Cleverly arrives at the opening's promise with the zombie-therapy role reversal.